Thursday, April 16, 2015

AMiable Solution #138: Besting Your Blurbs: 4 Tips for Writing Descriptions that Sell

If you’ve ever written a blurb, or description, of a product or service for your organization’s catalogs, brochures, websites, etc., then you know it can be challenging.  Whether you’ve written a handful or hundreds, you can increase the odds of getting your desired outcome--a sale, subscription, membership, or donation--if you keep the following four tips in mind.

1. Know the material, product, or service.  This may sound silly, but you can’t sell what you don’t understand.  It’s not your job to read every book you publish, run every machine your company owns, or visit every client or benefactor of your services.  But it is your job to become a sort of expert in all of the things your organization does.  How do you do that?  If you don’t have firsthand knowledge or experience with the products or services, talk to someone who does.  Talk to the designers, creators, installers, etc.  Have a good understanding of what the product or service does, who needs it, how it works, and what benefits it creates.  Don’t forget to address or include any emotional response or benefit.

2. Know your audience.  Are you writing for someone who has never heard of your organization before or a loyal customer?  Do your readers prefer technical language or less formal, more colloquial terms?  What motives them?  What needs do they have?  The more you know, the better you can tailor your text.

3. Include all the important details.  Don’t assume everyone knows everything about what you’re promoting.   If a piece of information--dimensions, frequency, times, etc.--could help determine the suitability of a particular product or service for a customer, include it.

4. Include all the benefits.  Features are important and should be included in your description, but remember that your product or service was created for a reason.  It serves a function, and that function is to help someone.  Highlight all the ways your product or service saves users time, money, effort, etc.

Once you have your blurbs written, remember that they’re not ever completely done.  Review them occasionally and update them whenever you have new information to incorporate: new endorsements, new credentials for the creators, new ways of explaining typical benefits, etc.

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